We finished the rough edit of the sequence on Monday and got feedback on it. Here is a summary of the main feedback points:
- Narrative needs to show more progression, start seems a bit loose (input more candle shots and boyfriend shots instead of pulpit shots)
- Change the first chorus so there is more movement in the shots, seems a bit too static
- Input more CU of lead singer during first verse, change the opening band shot so that there is less black space
- Shots need to go in closer, input more CU
- Only show lead singer on the breakdown, don't go to the ECU of guitar
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